Comment on Daniel's recent post! :)

I don't know why but it wouldn't let me comment on Daniel's post so I decided to just make a post about it! :)

Great job Daniel! I really like how your improving a lot! It's a LOT better than the first couple learning logs you posted a long time ago. I can see that it has a lot more detail and writing in this one, but I still do think that there's more room for details. For reflections and connections, I noticed that you mainly write about how it can help us in other subjects/places. It's really good but I'm thinking that maybe you could connect to your own life and talk about your past and for example, things that you did in elementry that's similar to what we are learning now. I also like how you included the tips section this time! Good job, but don't forget to write who's going next at the end if you can! :)